Originally Posted by John Lambert
Oh, I was so hoping the investigation was over.
Nah. That'd be too easy.

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Only if they can prove it's Jimbo's lunchbox.
So, they can't just take a homeless kid's word?

Originally Posted by John Lambert
There are almost no lies in Clark's back story.
But there aren't many facts he can prove, either.

Originally Posted by John Lambert
I think "seemed to grow" would flow better.
Thanks. Fixed.

Originally Posted by John
Originally Posted by Part 167
Jonathan took a sip of his coffee, and then said, “You thought she’d never forgive you for proposing before telling her you’re Superman.”
I'm not sure she has.
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It feels like there should be something between "as" and "they", such as "that", or "to mean".
Well, I fixed this, but probably not in the way you meant. LOL. Thanks.

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As long as Mrs. Lane is alive, I think Lois will forgive him.
LOIS: Clark, my mom's alive! How could you?!
CLARK: huh

Originally Posted by John
Originally Posted by Part 167
Martha leaned towards him. “You still haven’t told her?”
Technically he did, just not in a way she believed him.
Clark's been more honest that Lois knows, but not in a way he can prove or that she might appreciate.

Thanks for you comments. smile1

Last edited by VirginiaR; 05/11/14 02:54 AM.
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