First; Wonderful part. well done.
“Ms. Lane’s father is a respected physician with tied to a number of wealthy celebrities,”
I hope you are planning to use this later. I tend to forget that at this point in time Sam Lane, whatever his personal failings, is a highly regarded member of the sports community.
CLARK: "Dr. Sam Lane. Sam _Lane_! Wait a minute... Is he..."
LOIS: "My father.", "So you've heard of him."
CLARK: "Anyone who reads the sports pages has. Practically invented reconstructive surgery for athletes. He builds them a new hip, a new knee, and they come back better than before.
I wonder how the coach or his team would be treated by the rest of the sport community if they hurt Dr. Lane's daughter.
Perhaps this is something Clark can use? Being a trusted couriers he goes everywhere and meets people in all walks of life. Perhaps he could put the word in where it might help.
How would the coach or members of the team react if a well respected pro football player who has been helped by Dr. Lane "happen" to drop by the high school and greet Lois in the course of doing so.
Except for Tom Church I think it would stop the rest in their tracks.
