Again, many thanks to my wonderful Beta, Lynn S.M. for tackling this epic without complaint.
Happy to have helped. But "epic"? If it were one of my writings, it would be of relatively epic length, but for you, this is so short it barely qualifies as a vignette. Or were you using Bizarro-speak there? (Me find your use of "epic" so easy to understand, me head hurt.
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Let me say publicly what I mentioned in our private conversations... I'm impressed by how much your writing style has matured since you first started posting fanfic here.