Yeah, Mike, I got misty-eyed! You happy?
Corrina, you are

! I don't have any idea how this story could be improved. Nor have I sufficient superlatives with which to praise this beautiful work. You are indeed the mistress of matters of the heart. Not that many others don't write romance well - just that you've set the bar so high I can barely see it.
Thank you for sharing this vision of love and beauty.