Great ending, KK
I am so glad that Clark got a chance to know all about her doodles--and see for himself the progression of her feelings for him throughout their friendship. For a guy that has always needed to hide a part of himself--and pretend to be two people--that reassurance would mean a lot, regardless of hearing how Lois felt about him at the end of your story. It was a bit snoopy of him to go into her briefcase (BUT--I am so glad that he did
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Lois Kent.
There, in the margin, was a written declaration of all his hopes and dreams.
This part--my favorite part of your sequel. I truly enjoyed picturing Clark, there in Lois' apartment, seeing--from her own handwriting--everything he's always wanted come into being. It was really touching--and such a cool 'moment'
She giggled and grinned against his shoulder, speaking for the first time. "You still haven't washed behind your ear."
Great last line--and such a creative arch back to the beginning.
Really enjoyed your story, KK--and getting two different sequels to boot...
Thanks
Laura
