She's BACK!!!

I was beginning to wonder and anxiously waiting the next chapter!

Thanks for posting. It was great!

I LOL at
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He gave her a long look. “Lois, I know you well enough to know you think your old editor here should be treated like a prize mushroom until you’re good and ready to tell him what you’re up to. So I want my assurances from him.” He turned to Kent. “What have you two got going?”
figuring that Clark would not give him as much of a run around as Lois.

I also loved the discussion at Uncle Mike's place and Clark running off to talk to Jonathan and Martha about what was happening. I assume/hope a visit to Smallville is in the not so distant future for Lois...

The Trask scenario is probably not surprising given Clark not being a Planet reporter when the Bureau 39 invasion of Smallville occurred. Sad to hear that Rachel and Wayne are gone but it gives the excuse to involve the FBI in the situation.

Nice to see the normal Henderson/Lois exchange also. A very nice chapter setting up a lot more action and potential romance but of course it depends on whether you send Lois back or she stays there. Either scenario would work given the situations you have set up.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Mike


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Remove all the misery you are able to remove.

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