Yay, feedback!!!

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Your introduction has me puzzled on what the plot of your story will be since it only seemed to claim what the story isn't. I agree that Cat ruins Clark's reputation plot sounds interesting.

Puzzling you was kind of the point of the whole introduction. I'm glad it worked wink.

Anyway, you captured the real plot pretty quickly, yes this will be a story about a Clark who has been burned before. I wanted to explore a situation in which Clark does not want to be attracted to Lois, not unlike the way I did it in "Only in my dreams". This Clark has completely different reasons for his reluctance, though. And of course, he will be completely helpless to fight her bewitching charms devil muhaha!!!

Thanks for your nice feedback, Virginia, mrsMxyzptlk, Laura, Iolanthe and DebbieG. You really make my day. jump

Last edited by bakasi; 07/11/14 04:50 AM.
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