Thought I'd go ahead and start a feedback thread

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I was really looking forward to the next part, Bakasi--and you sure did not disappoint! Very intriguing chapter

Ah--so now we know why Clark is looking into Lex...somehow he thinks that Lex is responsible for Lana's death. Interesting! Very curious as to what happened to Lana? Did it happen during/after Lex's lecture at Midwestern U? Feel so bad for Clark--having to deal with the death of someone he cared a lot about, feeling possibly responsible, trying to right the situation and not being able to. He's been through a lot--makes sense why he's a bit cautious of Lois.
Like Martha said though...I hope he gives this girl a chance

Looking forward to part 3! Great story

Laura