I liked it, too! Cute, and very sweet. I'm glad he didn't start to age when she got rid of the red K.
Even though I know the Peter Pan story, I have to confess that I wasn't thinking of that story when I read the beginning of this.
Because many (most?) of us are reading Wendy Richards' newest story, and spending a lot of our time alternately praising her and threatening her, I'm ashamed (embarrassed?) to admit that I thought at first that you'd made her the hapless victim - er, heroine - of the story. That it was a thinly veiled threat.
I'm happy that I was wrong - it's a cute story, and I hope you will definitely write a sequel. I'd like to see where they go from here.
~Toc
