Thanks for starting this post. I read the story early, but did not want to start a comment post...bad me!
Anyways loved the story. There is so much that seems suspicious at this time, not neccessarily bad, but I feel like I am entering the world of the unknown. I hope that there trip goes well and the people they are going with are really nice. Who are these people? Is there a different story that is a pre/sequal to this part? If there was that would explain why I am a little confused. Otherwise you definately have got me intruiged with the mistory.
Good Job...Keep and it...I am definately looking to see more ASAP
