This is the first time I have commented upon this story, but I have been enjoying each part. This feedback is long overdue. Better late than never I suppose.
There is no such thing as late feedback. It's always appreciated.
First off, you are a tremendously talented writer. The earlier parts to this story and the story that precedes it are so powerful in that you can make the characters’ thoughts and feelings very palpable.
Em? Do you realize how many times I've read this?
Whoa, I didn't see that one coming...the hit from behind. Come back and finish this scene!
Coming up soon, Sheila and Maria!
Thank you guys for such great comments.
Sara
