DebbieG: Debbie!!! Hi! wave

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I enjoyed the story (I always like Ultra Woman stories!), and I think Christina is right: you could continue it if you want to.
Thank you. Yes, I find that Betas are usually right, even if you don't always want to hear what they say when they say it. /Many thanks to Lynn S.M. and Wendy, my other betas, who had the guts to tell me that Part 3 -- the first draft -- didn't work. AT ALL./

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- How do they get the Red K back?
- Will the Newtrich Sisters knowing Lois is UW compromise Lois and Clark?
- How does Lois take to superhero-hood? Does she keep her powers permanently, or lose them like Jesse Stepanovich?

Inquiring minds want to know!
Basically, you hit Christina's points exactly on why Part 3 didn't feel like "The End" to her. Thanks for your advice.

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.