Adding my voice to say what a wonderful, beautiful and FUN story.

I love the premise that Lois already is in love with Clark. And looking forward to seeing how Lois knowing she's in love with Clark before he recognizes he's in love with her changes things.
If I start quoting dialogue, the whole chapter is likely to end up being quoted. I did also love the Perry and Lois dialogue switch.
Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
