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And that's when she realised how stupid she'd been. Trying to second guess her every decision, just so that she'd do what OL did the first time around … it had actually led to the very thing she was trying desperately to avoid. A life … a future … without Clark.

Because she would be dead.
Ouch. Talk about an expensive lesson.

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Her suggestion for a change of clothes had fallen on deaf ears.
I love that in this universe, she deliberately planted the change of clothes suggestion.

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And it really would 'explode' his universe when she told him. When, not if. Even if they waited years until they were together, she would still have to tell him, and explain, at some point.
Nice pointing out that in this universe, it is Lois who has a secret, not Clark. (Of course, he *thinks* he's keeping a secret from Lois, but that's another story.)

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Now that they were saved … she resolved to live her own life … not OL's.
I'll intrigued to find out how this decision changes things.

Another good part.

Joy,
Lynn