This story just keeps getting better!
And… she was calling him “Kent.”
Never a good sign.
Clark’s eyes… “I saw it.”
Awww. Wait until you see he was looking at YOU, Lois.
She needs to be hit over the head with the facts,
That does seem to be the trend with Lois...
“I’ll agree with you there. He has a wonderful smile.”
You love him, Lois...we all know it
Pretending was bad…
Lucy looked at Lois.
…Yet that was how she lived her life.
Too true.
I also liked how you had her writing about Superman and switching to Clark. If that doesn't show who her thoughts are moving to, I don't know what does. Great job. Can't wait for the next part!