Great story.. I really like the way you're developing these teen characters. It seems to flow naturally from what we knew of them back in the smart kids episode.  More soon please. Marcy 
(Elrond's blessing at the departure of the company from Rivendell)
"Farewell, and may the blessing of Elves and Men and all Free Folk go with you.
May the stars shine upon your faces!"
-Lord of the Rings, J.R.R. Tolkien
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