Each time I think to myself, I'll quote this line, I consider another one. So, apparently, I just want to quote your entire vignette. Yes, everything fell apart in the blink of an eye. He lost everything and everyone he cared most (save his parents) about. I agree with the comparison to Kryptonite. Sometimes emotional pain is worse than physical pain. Well done.

At least, we'll see them live happily ever in HoL, right? wink


VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.