I think the Mt. St. Lois line is one of my favourites in this segment. I ROTFL'd.

I really enjoyed the reworking of this scene from HIM, Marcy - especially the turnaround of Lois inviting Clark into the bed. This is going to be fun. laugh

You had a verrrrrrrrrry nice steamy moment in there, too. /me fans herself rapidly.

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His lips seemed to linger, before Lois lunged slightly forward and pulled him back to her again.
LOL! Hussy! goofy

And, I just loved this:

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“May I kiss the bride?” As if on cue, Jimmy stepped into the room, beaming from ear to ear.
Amazing! For once, Jimmy's timing was perfect and he didn't interrupt anything. rotflol rotflol

Oh, and it seems I was so busy enjoying Clark being stymied over Lois's bed invite that I completely missed a really obvious typo at the very end of the segment, Marcy, blush so I quickly nipped in and corrected it in your post before I get thrown out of the Beta Readers Club. smile

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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

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