If he is AWOL how is backing him up?
Good question, Maria. RAFO.
Can't really say anything else because I am not very good at expressing myself. But I really do think this is great.
Thank you for taking the time to tell me, Mona!! I'm really glad you're enjoying it.
Sara, you wrote this so that I could almost feel Clark's warm breath against my own fingertips. It's so sweet and lovely and sensual! And the way you portray Clark's vulnerability and innocence is just so wonderful, and I get this almost irresistible urge to hug him.
Ann!
Thank you! That's a huge compliment, and I really love that you've pointed out one of my favorite moments.
Everything you said is just wonderful! And... I hope you find what you're looking for in part 24.
Em... so many great comments, I just don't know what to respond to. Thank you for all the lovely insights!!
And to answer this question:
As I said before, I am really liking this story. Have you considered posting on Mondays and Thursdays again?
I really wish I could, but the end of this semester at school really wiped me out and didn't leave a lot of time for writing.
So I don't have enough buffer to allow me to do that. However, now that I've got a nice, long winter break, I'm hoping to catch up on writing. We'll see if the Muse behaves.
Thank you all so much for the
wonderful comments!!
Part 24 coming up soon!
Sara
