HiddenMoon - I hope your tests all come back with good news. Though, I admit, I'm curious what having a ghostly presence demanding I write would be like. Let's hope it doesn't come to that.
cuidadora - Thank you! I'm delighted that you're continuing to enjoy the story.
Interesting how Lois is being treated like the other reporters in this regard. Wondering if someone else is covering Lois's Excelsior story or if it's been dropped.
Someone else has definitely been assigned to cover that story. Like Clark suspected, Lex wants an expose published about his competition.
Lex's multiple coincidences in one day is so typical. He doesn't realize that he should limit them to be believable. Lex's smooth, sophisticated yet creepy words are perfect. His misdirection attempt by suggesting Lois might be stalking him is definitely Lex, and shows his true nature so well.
I think he was counting on Lois feeling flattered by all the attention, not realizing that he was going overboard. He always was one for the dramatic gesture. If it's worth doing, it's worth over-doing.
Love the phone banter between Lois and Clark! It's so nice to see this take on BatP and HoL, where they're still talking and friends.
Banter between them is my absolute favorite thing to write. There's going to be a lot more before the story is over.
Sending Clark to Hawaii and the phone conversation about where he'll end up next are priceless and funny. And I had to stop laughing before continuing after reading the descriptions of what Lex and Superman might wear to bed.
Thank you! I'm happy to have amused you.
I haven't seen LaraMoon's fic about Clark in China.
I went searching through my old hard drive and found it. It's called "Kansas," but I don't believe she ever posted it on this site (it's a slash story). I'm guessing it could be found on fanfic.net.
Elizabeth - It's Friday here, now (finally!). I had Monday off, but this has been a really long week. Thank you so much for dropping in. I love long FDK (who doesn't? <g>), but I'm also encouraged just to hear that someone is reading the story.
Thanks to everyone who has left comments!
