Great start. I don't know the movie but I like it.
You should continue.
:rolleyes: I don't like stories with out title so she need a tentative title for now.
How about "Lois' Comfort and Joy"? Unless does are the kids name?
More ASAP, Please.
MAF
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
I don't know the movie but I like it.
How about "Lois' Comfort and Joy"? Unless does are the kids name? 
