What an impressive start to your fanfic writing career, CA.! You've made me feel sympathetic to Lana, someting that very hard to do.
and I like how you've written Clark, too.
Like Wendy, I'm sure this is a story that Hazel would appreciate. As I was reading this, I was reminded of her A Certain POV. Like that fic, you've given us an insight into Lana's mind and heart, as well as Clark's.
You write beautifully. So what's next?
c.
