Beautiful insight into Clark's life from Rachel's pov. Very poignant. I really empathized with her, and with the sense of isolation you show in Clark. Well done.
Marcy
(Elrond's blessing at the departure of the company from Rivendell)
"Farewell, and may the blessing of Elves and Men and all Free Folk go with you. May the stars shine upon your faces!" -Lord of the Rings, J.R.R. Tolkien
