What an interesting story!
I am pretty wrapped up into Alt. Clark, Alt. Lois, and everything going on in their 'world', but now you added a another really interesting layer to this story

.
I'm also enjoying a story where someone (besides Lois and Clark) are really after Lex. Trying to take him down. It has a nice, fresh feel.
Again, the details you add are spectacular

. The scenes come alive as you read them.
So excited for more...
Awesome!
Laura