Hi Lynn!

Originally Posted by Lynn S.M.
Another fun part. I liked how you had Clark not sure how much of the fight was an act until he saw Lois smile. I'm also enjoying the balancing act you are doing with using so much from canon while still deviating from it so much.

I'm glad that you liked Clark's uncertainty and Lois reassuring him. Sometimes things said in anger can't be taken back, but in this case they both needed reassurance that the fight was faked. I am having fun playing with canon to see how it can be tweaked to fit this story, and am glad you think it's working.

Thanks for reading & commenting! smile1

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