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I have the pleasure of doing some catch up, reading your story this afternoon. Lucky me! dance

This chapter was amazing. Everything is starting to come together. You can sense the momentum, and details are starting to fall perfectly into place.

I have to agree--the tunnels are a such a great asset for Clark. What a good idea!

I'm glad to have Clark 'in' now on everything going on. I'm really curious how everything Super will go for him--my gut is really well!--and Lois' reaction. It's interesting that he does have the memory of the other Lois accepting his secret/abilities to build upon as Lois and Clark adjust to Superman being in their lives. So excited to read more!

Yes the momentum of the story is moving along, all the pieces have been presented. Now they are falling into place and performing their parts in this crazy epic!

So glad to read the tunnels are a hit! dance

Clark needed to have all of his memories of that terrible experience with Tempus restored. It will help him to keep from making any mistakes regarding that egomaniac. Now those memories plus the ones he has now will dovetail together making him stronger and ready to take on the mantle of Superman.

Thanks for commenting!

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.