I agree with Mike. This complex plan is consistent with Templar/Tempus's modus operandi, and (hopefully) destined to fail spectacularly. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Clark figures out who he is. And of course when it all comes crashing down around Templar's head - and because his time machine is broken so presumably he can't easily escape. And this complex plot is a testament to your abilities as a writer and storyteller.
TresAx is an interesting name, and because of her last name wondering if it has any significance or ties to Stephanie.
Ralph hasn't just hurt Clark, he may have just doomed his own job and has put the Planet in a bind. Looking forward to seeing how this mess gets resolved.
Great story!
