Really, really good! You are so talented at the heartbreaking emotional stuff, you know. I hope this will be far from the last story from your keyboard!
You're so good at keeping this in character - neither of them prepared to step up and say the scary words soon enough, both hesitating, only saying part of what they need to say. And saying the wrong thing, or the right thing too late.
Great revelation, and I can
so see Lois's reaction to it, as well. This will have rocked her world, especially after rejecting Clark for Superman and having Superman reject her in return. And now Clark's
not the perfect guy she thought he was...
Can't wait to see what you have for us in the final part!
One tiny nitpick:
“If you think I’ve ever had nothing but respect and admiration for you, you’re so — you’re just so wrong,”
I think you mean
anything but respect and admiration here.
Wendy
