Thanks everyone for your comments.
But what makes this so different and interesting is that your adult Kent kids have distinct personalities of their own; in no way are they carbon copies of either Lois or Clark or some sort of combination, and that's nice.
I think the reason I keep adding onto this next gen series is that I like the characters so much. They are a lot of fun to write, and would probably be a lot of fun to hang out with.
I love the way you paint this picture, on dealing with his own obituary.
I appreciate that. Writing is a lot more interesting when it has some texture, and I think setting mood (without overdoing it) is very important.
I can't wait to see what Bruce has in mind.
I probably could've been a little more clever with the title on this one.

Some parts of the coming story have been hinted at, even aside from the title, but hopefully the A plot will keep you on your toes.
Thanks for reading, and please keep an eye out for future postings. We have a ways to go before we're done.
-Cindy