This is so emotional, Sara, so tense. Wow! You did make me feel that Lois had been shot. My breath totally caught in my throat.
I'm thrilled to hear that. That's... everything I hope for when I'm writing - that I can affect people with my words. So... thank you.
I have no time to write much more than this right now, but I must say that your story definitely makes my Mondays nowadays!
Awwwww!!! Thank you , Ann!! That made my week!!
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"And I'm not losing you! So shut up, and let's go."
Beautiful!
Thank you for pointing that part out, Maria! I was really hoping those few lines would come across as they seem to have done.
Moi? Kill Pete? I'm still saying nothing.
Part 28 coming up soon!
Sara
