I think that VampLex was just covering his bases with wanting Willow. How many times has Superman survived Kryptonite???
I loved that he was using his head with the lead foil!!!
One little nag and its one of those British/US American things.
Lois grabbed a handful of notes and threw them on the table...
That should be 'bills' not 'notes'. Knocked me right out of the story when I hit that line. If you want to avoid it completely, you could say that she grabbed a handful of money instead. Both sides of the pond would find that acceptable, I think.
I realise that your British and so is your spelling and most of us on this board can live with that. Honestly, I've not even noticed it on the two or three mega-stories of yours that I've read. I find your stories very entertaining and totally believable.
James