Terry, this is fantastic! Beyond fantastic. It's got it all, humour, space-flight excitement, fantastically accurate science and techie information (are you sure you don't have this secret identity as a science teacher yourself?), spot-on Lois/Jimmy interaction, haircut for Lois - did anyone tell Tank? - and totally wonderful dialogue between Lois and Clark. I don't have time to write much here, I really don't, but please imagine I quoted
everything that angelic_editor and Nicole quoted already! Ah, I could have quoted a lot more of this, a lot more! Terry, you should see the smile on my face right now, after reading this!!! But there's also a slightly haunted look in my eyes, because I'm in a hurry. So, gotta run, but this... oh, believe me, it so made my day!!!!
Ann