Whoa! So much feedback. I feel loved laugh

Carrie- Thank you smile To be honest, to me it kind of feels like an origin story for a dark version of Superman... some sort of weird Batman/Superman amalgam.

Shallowford- That has to be the best reason for leaving a short comment I've ever seen lol

Queenie- Thank you for the inspiration! It's pretty rare that I respond to a challenge (think this the second one I've completed lol) but yours stuck with me for some reason.

Morgana- No promises, my muse is incredibly fickle these days grumble

Thanks everyone! I can't promise that I'll write a sequel (though I think Folc's muse is chewing on one wink )... but I said that about At First Sight and look where it ended up!

"It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg