This is a really cute story. I was a bit confused in the middle, though, because it's not clear who is talking. It's fine going back and forth a few times without labels if there are only two people, but with more than that it's too easy to get lost.

Other than that, this was a fun read. I like how it's implied what Lois and Clark will change without having to show it with a longer story.

This kind of setup really makes you think. Would you go back and relive your life if you could? I don't think I would. There are a lot of things I have experienced that I don't want to go through again but would be inevitable.

"It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)