CarrieReneTook me a minute because I didn't watch the show to much. Nice take on adding the show into the mix and how you wrote them out of the mess.
Vigilante John Reese was famous for trying to get out of situations faster than he got into them. His signature smirk and gentle voice could turn deadly in an instant. Once Joss told him they made a mistake, neither one of them wanted to stick around for the fallout. But since he was contacted by Finch he really wanted them to have a lead as to who was causing the problem.
I like it. Wasn't Joss wrote out of the show after the first season? Great work though, I really liked how you wrote them and how you wrote their mistake.
Detective Joss Carter's character did not leave the series until the middle of season three. Leaving the potential for examining her and John's feelings for each other unexplored. So glad you enjoyed my brief exploration of Person of Interest's characters.