Hi Terry,
This revelation is very well written, and I'm glad to see that the person I suspected turned out to be the murderer.
However, there is still another few parts to this story, so could there be even more plot twists?
You have really upped the tension in the latter stages of this part. I'm on the edge of my seat wondering how Lois is going to get out of this one.
And the way you end! Come on, get back in here and post at once.
Great part, Terry.
Yours Jenni
