This was just an awesome new part! I am loving this story more and more with each subsequent chapter.
I particularly enjoy how you've written the children. They are such sympathetic characters and feel so real that you feel their pain at the loss of Clark just as deeply as Lois.
And the conversation between her and Jimmy at the end was just so touching.
Keep it up, can't wait for more!
(Incidentally I just loved that you named one of Lois' kids Sara...without an h...that's my name
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