Well, I haven't read the stories that this one is a sequel to, but I find this one definitely fascinating. I like the idea of a super-powered Bill Henderson, but I am, I must point out, always first and foremost a Lois and Clark fan. And of those two, if I have to choose, I'd actually pick Lois! And I very much like your portrayal of Lois here. The idea of Lois investigating a serial rapist is very intriguing, but obviously frightening, too. I have read at least three LNC fanfics where Lois actually got raped herself, and I can tell you that's
not the kind of thing I'm looking for in this fandom.... But I don't think you would do that to us, Nan. Still, it's almost a foregone conclusion that the rapist will come after Lois, considering the near-victim in this story, Sharon, actually looked a lot like Sam Lane's daughter!
Ah, well. This story definitely has a
lot of potential. You mentioned Ultra Woman, too. Wonder if I could persuade you to let superpowered Lois make an appearance?
Anyway, I'm very intrigued, so keep the story coming!
Ann
