Originally Posted by Mouserocks
hyper OMG! (delayed FDKing, I know, I know) But the good news is I've now read it twice and I'm doubly excited for posting to get under way!

Thanks Mouse! Glad I was able to grab your attention. smile

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
I love the setup. Poor Clark, in a mental hospital? Lex watching him the whole time? Even the hallucination where he reveals himself-- it's just heartbreaking.

Yes, there's a lot at play which you find out some in Chapter 1 that brought them to this point where he revealed himself.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Question #1: Is that really Lois coming to see him? I'm guessing not, because otherwise Lex would see her as well, so he must be hallucinating... but how would he know about her hair change?

rotflol Very insightful but I'm not ready to reveal that part just yet. You'll get some more information later on though.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Question #2: GAH Is it possible to have too many other questions?

For this fic the answer is 'no' because I left a lot of unfinished business on the table here.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
How will Lois figure out the truth?

That is coming soon.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Where will she go?

You will find out in a few chapters I promise.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Is she going to try to testify/bring charges against Lex?

The reason why that isn't an option does come out in the next few chapters.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
How will Clark escape?

That is the goal of this fic. There will be plenty of attempts.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
What will Lex do next?

That's always a question isn't it? What is Lex going to do? This Lex is far more sinister thanks to the way things have played out. See chapters 1-3 for more intel.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
If Lex were to die of natural causes, would anyone remember where Superman was?

Can he even die of natural causes? razz I mean, the guy keeps getting resurrected so my belief of him naturally dying has been lost.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Does "toys in the box" mean Lex will be sidewalk decoration in the end?

LOL! Come on, you know I can't give you that much info.

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Will Clark ever get his life back? How crazy will he go?

The question to be asking is: Is he really crazy?

Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Phew. Okay. I'm done, for now. Hopefully more is to come soon, because I'm excited to read this one (and also I'm excited to not be playing catchup and reading the story from the beginning).

wave

Thanks for the feedback, Mouse. Chapter 1 is up and should answer some of the burning questions as this one is mostly a flashback of the events that led up to the reveal.

Enjoy! wave


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