Terry, you've given us another brilliant chapter that I absolutely *loved.* This has been such a fantastic ride, and I'm so sad that there's only one more part to go!
Your writing is stellar as always, and (eep, I know Ann's already quoted this, but I just can't help myself — it's too lovely and wonderful and perfect not to mention again) I so so so enjoyed the interaction between Lois and taser-wielding Matt Walker:
She turned to leave, but Walker said, "Ma'am? One more thing before you go."
She turned back. "Yes?"
He stood and came to attention, then gave her a textbook salute. As he released it, he said, "It's been an honor serving with you, ma'am."
Lois was touched. "I'm not in any military, Sergeant, so I can't salute you, but I can do this." She kissed him on the cheek, then smiled warmly. "That's kind of like a civilian salute."
No part of him moved except his eyes, which twinkled, and his mouth, which said, "Yes, ma'am, a real honor."
*hearts* Brilliant.
I wasn't surprised when Karen told Lois about her sexuality. You wrote it in wonderfully, and Lois' reaction to the kiss was so appropriately tactful.
Again, you've woven a terrific story, Terry — I can't wait to read your wrap-up, and to see what happens when Lois gets back to The Planet and to Clark!
