Very well done, Catherine! I loved it; such powerful writing, such intensity of emotions... amazing!

If you'll allow me a comment...

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how hers seemed to fit perfectly in the center of his.
I'd suggest that you make it 'how her ring seemed to fit...'. It took me a while to understand you were referring to the rings.

Great job! Keep it up!
See ya,
AnnaBtG. thumbsup

What we've got here is failure to communicate...