Hi ladies!
So I finally made my way through your story over the course of the week - interrupted by kids, Halloween, and the plague going through my house, of course. And I was very confused at first, since I'm not a Lucifer watcher. But it got easier as I went on and I have to admit, watching Clark (of all people!) befriend the Devil was something I never saw coming and found hilarious all at once. It's an interesting dynamic between them, so much in common and so much the exact opposite.
I did wonder from the beginning, and I think you kind of touched on it a bit...all of what is happening to Lucifer might *not* actually be God being a crummy parent, but His way of testing Lucifer and letting him earn absolution.
Nice work and seamlessly - I have NO idea which of you wrote what. And that is a HARD thing to accomplish! Congrats!