Hi Terry,
This is a nice lighthearted wrap up of a very tense story.
I did miss Clark's 'air time', but you are right, Lois was a very good investigator and award winning reporter. It's perfectly plausible that both Lois and Clark would work alone when the occasion demanded.
I have to say, I was a little taken aback by Karen kissing Clark. I wasn't upset by it, anymore than I was at her gayness, but I did find it a bit strange and felt it wasn't really needed in the story.
However, that's my only nitpick in a story which I very much enjoyed and I'm sad that it is over.
Look forward to reading more stories from you, Terry.
Yours Jenni
