I've already given some feedback on this story personally, but I wanted to chime in here to answer the question about putting this on the archives.
Of course you should. And, it's not up to me if you should or not. My little fic might have given you the impetus to write your story, but I have to claim on it. Remember, all our fanfics are based on someone else's characters, and the world that was created by a television show. In a real sense, we are all building off someone else's ideas.
I found this take off, interesting and quite different from what one might expect.
I applaud anyone who takes the time and effort to write. I also feel that the archives should be the archives should be the final resting place for any fic effort that you want on there.
Hey, it doesn't matter what inspires you, just go for it.
Tank (who wishes he could get inspired to work on his own original story)
