Originally Posted by cuidadora
I don't have much to say, since I agree with everything in Terry's awesome feedback.

It is nice to see that Lois at least has those goons figured out. My first thought was, I hope they're not also first responders since they don't recognize someone frozen in fear with a possible panic attack. Hope that attack was on tape and reviewed by their superiors.

It's a good thing Clark has a dense molecular structure, even though he's lost his super powers, which I assume is why he wasn't more seriously hurt.

Glad to see things might be looking up for Clark.

Hey there!

Thanks for reading, Cuidadora!

I actually had this idea in my mind that Bruce's men would be other Robins/Nightwings that came after Jason. Maybe a B39 member or two. But it was never appropriate within the story to bring it up, so I left it out. But it's why none of them are concerned about Bruce turning on them/he's not worried about them outing him about the unlawful imprisonment going on.

Clark is a lucky man that he's resilient to harm more than the average man, though I would also imagine the blow was a bit restrained so as to knock him out without turning his brains into applesauce. wink


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