Oh wow. I've been waiting until the final parts to read this, and I'm so glad I did. I can't imagine waiting days between parts, though I'm now going to have to wait for the last two parts. I love the way you tied everything together. And I like how you wove "War of the Worlds" into it, even though any story having to do with that play scares me, considering the how it affected its listeners. It's amazing how you wove it into the story. I got real confused over all of the relationships (but figured most of them out now!), and I'm still wondering about a few of them, especially the poor little girl in the hospital. I can't wait to see how this ends and how you tie up the loose ends. So... when's the next part?
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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