Originally Posted by LadyTpower
Thanks for this great start. I love it
You are welcome!

Originally Posted by cuidadora
My goodness! What a great introduction for your story! Intriguing, mysterious and heart-wrenching. Looking forward to more! clap
My goal was to provide the reader with some shock. Looks like I was successful. grin

"Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book.