Wow. This just gets better as it goes along. It's dark and chilling and scary and it's not unlike what Stephen King might write if he were an L&C fanfic author.

I'm ready to find out what happened between the present time and Lois's marriage to Luthor. There's a whole, whole lot here that hasn't been touched on yet, and when Clark remembers (assuming that he does remember it all) he's going to have a reaction of some kind, and I'd be surprised if it was a controlled one.

Trask as a hero? The prophet of doom and alien invasion? Frightening, truly frightening. This is dark and gloomy and if Wendy's reading this her fandom has more angst on its plate than it can chew. Keep it up. I want to know more and I want it as soon as it's ready! Straight from the oven (or in this case the word processor).


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing