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Hey Cuidadora!
First, I should say that I have never seen this show, or heard of it, so I have no idea who these people are (other than your explanation), but it sounds interesting.
Second, I kept track of what I was thinking as I read which is fun for me and I hope you enjoy it too.
I love to read what others think!
At the end of the first post: What?! You did not just cut it off after he talked to the clone!
When I realized there was another post: Oh thank goodness the rest of it is in the next post! :sigh of relief:
Beginning of second post: Ha! I love stories where Lois realizes earlier what kind of person Lex is.
Me, too. I’ve always had a bit of frustration with keeping Lois in the dark without a plausible explanation why an investigative reporter of her caliber would fall hook, line and sinker for Lex without questioning anything about him or his story after the Pilot.
Near the end of the second post: Oh, this brother of his has a chance? That sounds like a wonderful idea. Can't wait to see how that turns out!
At the end of the second post: Oh you have to write a sequel! I need to see what happens with this clone!
When I realized there was a third post: Holy crap, there's more!
Somewhere in the middle of the third post when I thought about Clark suddenly having a twin: If he stays around in Metropolis, will Clark suddenly have a twin? How will Lois react? Will she figure it out?? Was he always a twin and they were adopted by different families that didn't know it??
Good questions.
At that last hug between them: I'm sure those were all very manly hugs.
I wrote this thinking of the clone as thinking like a child, not an adult. They were meant to be hugs between an older and younger brother, so as “manly” as the clone with the mind of a child can be. He’s getting hugs from the first person who offered him both a hug and compassion.
At the end of the third post: He's 3?! How cute!
Thanks. Other stories I'm aware of where the clone survived have him as an adult.
I really like what you did here with this episode. I always wondered what it would be like if the Clone hadn't died. And I sincerely hope you intend to write more of this story. I really need to know this 3-year-old Clark-twin and his story! And I hope if involves Lois and Clark! Especially since he's obviously going to be attached to Clark.
Thank you.
Working on the sequel.
