@Morgana: The story is an example of something called "badfic." It's badly written, badly plotted, badly handled, and quite deliberately awful. Queenie was quite intentional in her choice of - well, everything, which is why Lois is astounded by Clark's continued attention to it.
Queenie, I think you write badfic better than the "authors" who don't know that's what they're writing.
For those of you who've never seen the Hogwarts fanfic "My Immortal," please do not seek it out. Reading it will cost you IQ points. To call it "awful" is a compliment.
